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Eggs.
This was my Art 201 class Egg project. We were to draw 5 or more eggs.
I decided to do this with charcoal sticks/pencils.
I got a 'B' for this assignment. (Like my journal explains)
What the professor said, "Nice attempt- Good composition but the white pencil turns everything a ghostly grey + overall you need better shading."
I was absent for the lecture on shading so what he said was totally understandable.
This was my Art 201 class Egg project. We were to draw 5 or more eggs.
I decided to do this with charcoal sticks/pencils.
I got a 'B' for this assignment. (Like my journal explains)
What the professor said, "Nice attempt- Good composition but the white pencil turns everything a ghostly grey + overall you need better shading."
I was absent for the lecture on shading so what he said was totally understandable.
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2048x1536px 679.73 KB
Make
LG Electronics
Model
VM670
Focal Length
4 mm
Date Taken
Nov 17, 2012, 4:02:33 PM
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Hey hey, sorry for the absence, havent been paying attention much to my friends here it seems :/
What colour paper were you drawing on? it seems like you went a bit full on with the dark greys, no need to worry about grading and what lecturers say, at least don't take it to the heart
I actually like it, its a bit blurred at points, granted. That's whats making you think it needs better shading.
The eye is not used to bright dull contours. To be fair, i absolutely love the definying features of the eggs, and the only problem i see is with the two eggs on the left, the shadows are putting the feel of the picture off....
then again, i could be talking crap
What colour paper were you drawing on? it seems like you went a bit full on with the dark greys, no need to worry about grading and what lecturers say, at least don't take it to the heart
I actually like it, its a bit blurred at points, granted. That's whats making you think it needs better shading.
The eye is not used to bright dull contours. To be fair, i absolutely love the definying features of the eggs, and the only problem i see is with the two eggs on the left, the shadows are putting the feel of the picture off....
then again, i could be talking crap